匠山道:"末句却好。你且说,有(you)何可爱之(zhi)处(chu)?"春才道:"到腊(la)梅(mei)花(hua)开两三(san)片(pian)时,先生(sheng)要放学了,岂(qi)不(bu)爱(ai)见(jian)么?"众同窗大(da)家(jia)喷(pen)饭。匠山评道:"温、乌(wu)两生’自郐以下(xia)无讥’。荫之名心重(chong)些,却还着实;’花烛新郎’句虽纤(xian)巧,也是(shi)少(shao)年人自有之乐。吉士(shi)色心太重,少年人所当炯(jiong)戒;况夜半(ban)时倒挂(gua)鸟鸣,有何(he)好听?唯(wei)’关差(cha)’一(yi)句(ju),本地风(feng)光,却(que)见(jian)性(xing)情。
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