匠山道(dao):"末句却好(hao)。你且(qie)说,有何可爱之(zhi)处?"春才道:"到(dao)腊梅花开两三片时,先生(sheng)要放学(xue)了(le),岂不爱见么?"众(zhong)同(tong)窗大家喷(pen)饭。匠山评道:"温、乌(wu)两生’自郐以(yi)下无讥(ji)’。荫之名心重(chong)些,却还(hai)着实;’花烛(zhu)新郎’句虽(sui)纤(xian)巧,也是(shi)少年人(ren)自有之乐。吉士(shi)色心(xin)太重(chong),少(shao)年人(ren)所当(dang)炯戒;况夜(ye)半时(shi)倒挂(gua)鸟鸣(ming),有何(he)好听(ting)?唯’关差’一句,本地风光,却见性情。
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